DAEDRIC FUN TIP:
Deliver fleeting happiness to a fellow mortal. Comment on their works.
3043: Blade Kvatch_arena_armor adorable artist:coekj character:Katia_Managan
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ThatGuyWithAKhajiitWaifu: Its a very cute :3.
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3041: adorable artist:DLeoWolf character:Katia_Managan dolls
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Vidiotdragon:
I have no idea if this will work, I don't know how the site does this and if it fails delete it.
Vidiotdragon: It worked!
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3039: artist:Limeman character:Quill-Weave hist_glands questionable very_casually_underdressed
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Vidiotdragon: Yup.
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3032: Cloak_of_Gray_Tomorrow Katia's_Thief_Tunic artist:breadcipher character:Katia_Managan magic_fire
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damrok4321: cute :3
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3033: artist:Adroma character:Bill_Nye character:Katia_Managan meme romance text very_casually_underdressed
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ThatGuyWithAKhajiitWaifu: wut :v?
Adroma: @Armored-Struggle-Wagon: ;))))@ThatGuyWithAKhajiitWaifu: I still believe Katia loves you considering the look on her face.
Kewot_Rokar: BILL! BILL! BILL!
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3031: Blade artist:unknown_victor character:Katia_Managan looking_badass monochrome
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unknown_victor: Once again no references used, hope the proportions are right.
ThatGuyWithAKhajiitWaifu: It's kinda cute.
Geravind: Much better now!
The right ankle shouldn't be so freaking thin -- try to compare your own to other parts of the same leg. The skull size, the hands and the shoulders width fit one scale, everything other (even her head's details) -- the other scale. You merged them. Small hands make her wrists to look weirdly long. That sword is very fantastically impractical for her, but who cares... Her hip bone is still not noticeable enough, someone will say again about "too long waist". Your skill grows up, congratulations. =*_*=
woundedkneecap: Don't level DEX
Makkon: I rather like the sword.
Mind the size of your hands. Otherwise you have good proportions. Things to focus on in the coming months and years are anatomy studies and gestures. I like to use QuickPoses to practice. Nudity, of course. http://www.quickposes.com/ At this stage it's generally hard for me to give you specific feedback, but if you keep drawing every day and strive to find what you are weak and, and work on those weaknesses, you'll improve very fast. |
3029: armor artist:unknown_victor character:Katia_Managan machete monochrome
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unknown_victor: @Armored-Struggle-Wagon: criticise as much as you want, the more I know what's wrong with it the more I can improve.
Armored-Struggle-Wagon: @unknown_victor: It's more of the lines I can't mentally picture anything wrong with it! Every art is beautiful in its own way, regardless of skill, and stuff. ;3 (also I don't like criticizing things
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ThatGuyWithAKhajiitWaifu: You got that machete there?
unknown_victor: @ThatGuyWithAKhajiitWaifu: it's more of a double bladed medieval round axe with an unusually long handle, but machete works too.
Cereal: I feel like the handle at some point gets a little floppy.
Like gravity takes effect and it kinda melts downwards. The waist (below the breasts and above the hips) kinda seems a bit too long, too.
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Riddle78: Abdomen seem a little long to me,and the haft on that pole axe is... Well,far,far too long for service as anything other than a spear. Also,did she have an accident with Destruction magic? Because she seems to have lost her thumbs.
That said,excellent effort. Keep kicking that cat.
unknown_victor: @Cereal: @Riddle78: yeah, I may have stretched it a little.
Don't worry, improvements will be made.
AMKitsune: @unknown_victor: Aside from the slightly iffy body proportions (which have already been mentioned above), there's not much that I can see wrong with this scene. There's not much motion behind her pose so I imagine her standing in place lifting the axe's handle to try to gauge the (substantial) weight of the thing. That axe has to be meant for some kind of monster or Daedra, right? Surely neither Man nor Mer would be able to wield that thing in battle (and that includes muscle-bound Orcish highwaymen
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On the note of 'weight' however, one thing that I'll suggest is that given how heavy the business end of that axe looks, unless katia was abnormally strong in this scene, the axe wouldn't be resting on the edge of it's blade as it currently is but would have rolled onto its flattest section (a bit like when a similar scene is shown in Grim Fandango  )
To give you a rough idea of how that might look in your scene, I made a quick edit showing the axe head at more of an angle (I'm afraid you'll have to forgive the shoddy edit job. This was never meant to be a pretty edit  )
In this case, the angle of the axe head isn't in perfect relation to the angle of the held portion of the pole (because I'm lazy), but this is just to give you an idea of how it might look with an added sense of weight. I hope this was of some help.
unknown_victor: @AMKitsune: I was going to draw it stuck in the ground, but for some reason I didn't.
Like I said, improvements will be made. |
3034: Blade Colored artist:unknown_victor character:Katia_Managan looking_badass
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