GoodIdeasAreOverrated: fourth day, not so good. I WILL REDEEM MYSELF TOMORROW, as always you can vote on the poll. Link in source. Also you can join in the fun too! just start at day 1 or something idk.

GoodIdeasAreOverrated: Soz for late post btw

Odraode: The problem, I think, is that you have drawn the face frontally, and the body on profile, turned unnaturally. Sorry for my bad English, I hope you understand what I'm trying to express here.
In short, try drawing the body angled at 3/4. Cool blood effects tho.

Rukkaru: I think the thing that is making her face weird is that you forgot the nose.

GoodIdeasAreOverrated: THE DAMN PICTURE WAS TOO BLURRY