GrizzlyBear: So Foles couldn’t go with her? Damn. Very cool overall though, I liked those fight scenes. Btw don’t consider it a waste of my time at least. I’m usually looking for stuff to do here anyway, so it’s no problem really. But if you don’t want any more I understand
Great job Lapma
GrizzlyBear: Ayy sorry about the massive delay guys, that’s my bad. The image here was my biggest project yet, and I’m glad to have been a part of this, and thanks to Skyobolt for putting up with me lol. Chapter itself is outstanding, has gotta be my favorite one yet, and it gets pretty emotional too. I can tell you had a lot of time to refine it
GrizzlyBear: That looks really awesome! I gotta say that design is leagues better than what I was going for, so idk if there’s any valuable advice I’d be fit to give. What I’ve been working on is also taking a while and it still looks pretty awkward, so I’m a little pessimistic too lol. Outstanding job
GrizzlyBear: @Skybolt06: Yeah I might get spoiled, I saw that as one of the downsides. So if it doesn’t spoil too much and isn’t too complicated to draw, you can run it by me. If not, I can try asking a few other artists if they’re willing to help you. I’m still a beginner though, and you write these chapters a lot faster than I can draw, and I don’t want to hinder you
GrizzlyBear: @Skybolt06: Speaking of, If you’re thinking about adding artwork to future chapters, there might be a few artists here willing to do it for free. I could even help if I can, but you probably know I’m not too fast or good, and I’d hate to slow you down. Still, it’d be good practice for me if you ever need a relatively simple scene drawn, or you could go for someone more experienced
GrizzlyBear: I kinda read your comment before I read the chapter itself, which had me little more on-edge lol. I’m gonna say 4/10, cuz I expected some sort of betrayal, but not from him
GrizzlyBear: @Skybolt06: I noticed it. Sorry, I should probably leave a comment after every chapter so you know I’ve read it. And I’ve been checking the booru a lot less lately so I apologize for that too
@Skybolt06: I definitely thought you would appreciate it, and I’d feel kinda bad if I didn’t go through with it. Besides, I’m fresh out of ideas atm lol
GrizzlyBear: Yep, another Charlie Brown reference. Thanks to Skybolt for bringing up the idea, I just thought I’d be fun to try. I wanted to be quick because Halloween already ended several days ago, so this kinda ended up looking super half-assed in a few places lol
GrizzlyBear: Damn, you’d think they’d at least brief Katia about possibly having to get down and dirty with Turgenev beforehand, or try to avoid it somehow, because that seems a little unfair to her. Also getting drunk while undercover seems a bit risky, especially when she forgets she’s supposed to be Rajirra
GrizzlyBear: @Skybolt06: Don’t worry, I didn’t know what they were either when I first joined. Pools will categorize a group of posts into a collection and will be added to the pool list where it can be browsed. I just thought it’d work better than giving them all the friends in high places tag. So if that sounds good, go to pools in the top right and try creating one. If you get stuck you can read about it in the help page
Btw I think it’s awesome how you were able to write this at 14. I’m almost in my 20’s and I don’t think I’d do so well honestly
GrizzlyBear: Always good to see another one of these. Btw, have you thought of sorting these into a pool? Just for some extra organization if you’d like.
GrizzlyBear: @ChrisMono: In the games lore there’s a nearly extinct race called the lilmothiit (I think I spelled that right) so it’s not entirely impossible I guess. I believe they’re actually more fox-like, but maybe they can take many forms like the khajiit do
GrizzlyBear: @Skybolt06: I agree, that could be a problem in this case. You can try asking AMK about it, and maybe he can disable it for fanfics somehow
GrizzlyBear: I’m sorry but Kаtiа’s sudden name change has made this a little hard to take seriously lmao
But still, it’s a good chapter. I kinda wondered when Rajirra would show up
GrizzlyBear: Looks like I’m caught up with this one now. I usually don’t read fanfics, but in this case I’m glad I did, and it’d be cool to have this story to look forward to along with the actual comic. There are a few things that confuse me a little, like I don’t think she actually consented to becoming an agent. I know she wanted answers, but it didn’t seem like she formally agreed or anything. Idk, maybe I missed something and I’m mistaken, and it’s a really minor nitpick. I definitely enjoyed this either way.
Btw this reminds me of a story I tried to write a long time ago. Only mine was terrible, but it kinda had a similar theme
GrizzlyBear: Since people are posting their collab entries, here’s mine I guess. I also thought I’d throw in my older version without the cloak because why not
Btw thanks to Kuro for inviting me to this. It was a lot of fun and I’m really happy you guys thought of me
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imaginaryfriend. Also my September entry for the 2021 calendar collabGreat job Lapma
@Skybolt06: I definitely thought you would appreciate it, and I’d feel kinda bad if I didn’t go through with it. Besides, I’m fresh out of ideas atm lol
Also yeah, maybe I shouldn’t assume things so soon. Just a little worried for her in this scenario
Btw I think it’s awesome how you were able to write this at 14. I’m almost in my 20’s and I don’t think I’d do so well honestly
Actually, I’m already an hour into Nov 1st, so not really I guess :(
But still, it’s a good chapter. I kinda wondered when Rajirra would show up
This one was pretty tense. Good job
Btw this reminds me of a story I tried to write a long time ago. Only mine was terrible, but it kinda had a similar theme
I actually drew this with a mouse this time. It’s pretty weird but much easier than before
Btw thanks to Kuro for inviting me to this. It was a lot of fun and I’m really happy you guys thought of me