Brevity is the soul of wit. In essence, make anything the comes from your whelpling fingers be succinct, and that you don't overstay your welcome. Writing for too long can...
JaneC: This is great! The only thing I'd have to say is that it's kind of weird that the Argonian just... completely stops moving or doing anything when Katia and Rajirra show up, until Katia starts pickpocketing him.
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