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Weasel: This is obviously great, but there was one thing about this whole image that makes it look a little weird, and maybe you already saw this, but, uh.
As is, the neck looks like it attaches to the head just under the left side of the chin, especially because the light follows the same unbroken line down the cheek to the neck,
and because there isn't any line or coloration distinguishing the end of the weird furry cat beard, specifically over the neck.
Dramatic Descriptions
As is, the neck looks like it attaches to the head just under the left side of the chin, especially because the light follows the same unbroken line down the cheek to the neck,
and because there isn't any line or coloration distinguishing the end of the weird furry cat beard, specifically over the neck.