_Noxygen_: @Skybolt06: sounds like a winner! Just one thing...what is an etching? I tried looking it up and all I found was engravings and stuff. Also if there is anything specific you want for the drawing, feel free to ask! The more descriptive you are-the better it is for me to plan and visualize this stuff.

Skybolt06: Okay, so, etching is yeah, basically an engraving, but this is just a small indent in the armour I guess, so it would basically look just like a line in the armour, look up Halo armour for reference cause that's what I was visually kinda going for, and I think the armour should have kinda like the infernal gloves a glow in the etch, just like blue or something, also I'm thinking you could get her like holding a rifle or smg of some kind, facing left, you won't need to draw eyes or anything cause the visor is pitch black, and some cool like background particles, that's what I see anyway (this is cool though cause it feels like asking for a commission, which I've wanted to do but never have cause I can't afford it, but it seems like you're also excited for the art as well so...)

_Noxygen_: @Skybolt06: lol what a coincidence I've been practicing my art so I can do freelance work in the future, so yeah free commission! (Although I still have a long ways to go) this may take a while since I'm still learning how to use krita, but I'm getting faster at line work at least. Wish me luck my guy

Skybolt06: I do indeed wish you luck, can't wait to see the (what I presume to be extremely badass) final product

GrizzlyBear: @Skybolt06: Speaking of, If you’re thinking about adding artwork to future chapters, there might be a few artists here willing to do it for free. I could even help if I can, but you probably know I’m not too fast or good, and I’d hate to slow you down. Still, it’d be good practice for me if you ever need a relatively simple scene drawn, or you could go for someone more experienced

Skybolt06: You guys are so awesome, I'd absolutely love that, and if you're willing to take up an offer then I'd try my hardest to explain scenes with as much detail as possible (even though it may kinda spoil the story for who will make the art, but I guess I don't know how things would really work out) But yeah, I would totally be down for that idea, especially since I'm going to be able to get lots of the next chapter done because the weekend is here

GrizzlyBear: @Skybolt06: Yeah I might get spoiled, I saw that as one of the downsides. So if it doesn’t spoil too much and isn’t too complicated to draw, you can run it by me. If not, I can try asking a few other artists if they’re willing to help you. I’m still a beginner though, and you write these chapters a lot faster than I can draw, and I don’t want to hinder you

Skybolt06: Nah, anything that has to do with making this easier to visualize, will definitely make things cooler, and I'm still a beginner at writing, I've just gotten better over the last like... ten chapters, but as I've said before, I wouldn't have got this far without support from you guys, so I might as well return the favor, but yeah, I'll just private message you sometime, and we'll see how things go! (I think I've already got an idea for a scene too so... that's a plus)

AmericanPatriot: Joshua is a nasty fellow

Skybolt06: @AmericanPatriot: In this context yes, but in full light... (next chapter explains everything, I also plan to have a chapter after finishing the book explaining the entire thing and how everything makes sense)

AmericanPatriot: Did you make a unique tag intentionally or on accident?

JulioNoob100: accident

ADudeCalledLeo: A pleasant thought.

Skybolt06: The cake is on this lizards mind, nice art

damrok4321: cake good, art good

B_A_R_C_L_A_Y: c a k e

Zargothrax: Just a random thought (suggestion, take it or leave it) on the tagging problem mentioned:
If tags that are only used once could have red letters that could bring attention to something that is probably a mistake.
I mean, 95% of the time when a new tag is introduced, it's something that we already have a tag for, thus the entry will actually end up missing the tag(s) the artist intended it to have.

AMKitsune: @Zargothrax: That's a pretty good idea. I think I'll take it.

KuroNeko: Everyone should always stop for a moment and think about cake.
Cake is good.

ADudeCalledLeo: Yep, that's a lizard alright. A pretty good one, too!

Skybolt06: Very nice Quill, probably better than I could do XD

B_A_R_C_L_A_Y: behold

damrok4321: Who is it if not my fav lizard there. Nice art. Keep it up bro

KuroNeko: Best lizerd

ChrisMono: (Audio on) would take forever if I did in betweens, so this is happy holidays. (view in website if no audio)

B_A_R_C_L_A_Y: good luck cookie

ADudeCalledLeo: Cookies make everything better.
Good animation!

Skybolt06: Yay cookie, I find it awesome she pulled it from the snow, nice job!

Streetwind: But why are there crickets chirping in winter? =P

KuroNeko: That faceplant was amazing and the fact that's it's only two frames and there is no sound before it make it even better.

Zargothrax: Looks like they don't always land on their feet.

AmericanPatriot: @KuroNeko: you spoiled it

damrok4321: Poor kat, at least she had that cookie

KuroNeko: @AmericanPatriot: Ah, sorry. But let it be a lesson to never read the comments first.

APayne1776: By being the best Khajiit that you already are

Lurci: By sitting on my lap and giving me a kiss

Rick2tails: I can think of so many ways..many of them not very work friendly

KuroNeko: Ok this is amazing her outfit is just too adorable and those fluffy cheeks are so cute.
Zasily one of the best artwork I've seen in a while.

Zargothrax: Raydio is one of the artist here whose skills have improved the most since they joined the boruu. Truly impressive!

DarthVader: Give me her now! That’s an order!

Raydio: @Zargothrax: @KuroNeko: I’m humbled... thank you :)

Geravind: =*ω*=

Killyellowcatnow: That window triggered me

AmericanPatriot: @KuroNeko: Even more than the outfit and cheeks, the stance is likely the cutest thing.

bluedraggy: Wow - that's a REALLY good line!

Asperger_kitten_1337: ooh... neon colo- *hotline miami flashbacks*

Raydio: @bluedraggy: Thanks :^)

Toryu-Mau: ... This city... is where dreams come to die. >):^[
( Melancholic Blues plays in the background. )

Raydio: @Toryu-Mau: The Elves are running this city.

They have control over all the major trade ports that girdle this city's industry. The monopoly the Mer have made has given them unimaginable power. Although, It would be a shame if something came in and changed that, now wouldn't it?

Toryu-Mau: @Raydio: ... I swear by the nine, the Altmers are going to enslave everyone before the God Head wakes up from this dream. ]^:(<

furnut: But...but I DO wear sunglasses at night! also, great color choices!

jimmybub: slightly cat shaped couch has been noticed.

Raydio: @jimmybub: ;)

Skybolt06: I find this strangely alike to something somebody wrote, I don't know who wrote it and can't seem to grasp the writing, must've slipped from my mind... oh well...

Dominik: Soo cute, already lighter on the heart

Zargothrax: The way Raydio does lighting cannot be confused with anyone else. Very nice!

APayne1776: I feel tall

Deo: By that perspective I can say that she probably talking with high elf... A very HIGH high elf.

somethingsomething: This style is so good

damrok4321: I love those eyes

Atum_Doxhun: nice

AmericanPatriot: @KuroNeko: follow ups?

AmericanPatriot: Oh, nevermind. I see now why Raydio responded that way.

Skybolt06: XD, we all know of those, and some would rather not look back on them

_Noxygen_: I was sketching things and playing around and I really like how this came out ( I have really low standards.)

B_A_R_C_L_A_Y: bong

Skybolt06: If I could roll a blunt/smoke weed with anyone, it would totally be Katia, this is epic XD

Sashimi: @_Noxygen_: I quite like how this came out as well.

ADudeCalledLeo: Drugs: only marginally better than alcohol. Good art!

Rick2tails: NO! Drugs are bad Katia! mmmmmok?

Zargothrax: Katia's trying to discover a different type of magic

KuroNeko: Katia showing off those Khajiit acrobatic bonuses

B_A_R_C_L_A_Y: ...yeah ill just interpret that THIS is the party trick
safer for my psyche

Skybolt06: Another (probably false, but for the best) interpretation of the pineapple yo-yo trick

_Noxygen_: I'm wondering how the Pineapple convinced the meat sack to do this. nice!

ADudeCalledLeo: This is probably the best interpretation of the pineapple yo-yo trick, honestly.
Good art!

Rick2tails: Katia is very talented !!

KuroNeko: @B_A_R_C_L_A_Y: @Skybolt06: @ADudeCalledLeo: personally I think those are the best interpretations https://www.prequeladventure.com/fanartbooru/post/view/5677#search=pineapple_and_yo-yo_trick https://www.prequeladventure.com/fanartbooru/post/view/1854#search=pineapple_and_yo-yo_trick

@_Noxygen_: By asking nicely, like any civilized fruit would.

ADudeCalledLeo: @KuroNeko: >>5677 is the utopian interpretation of the trick, >>1854 is probably what actually happened.

Zargothrax: Hey, this is a really nice gesture! Did you use figure-skaters for reference?
Also, pretty adorable.

Raydio: stussy steve

madmanransom: stephane "stephanie" larouche
the breton boy
the nose
the prude

MrCoopy: ew
I mean, good art, very well-made
but ew

AmericanPatriot: So few comments on this one despite the quality.