Bill: Good work! only criticism is that the left eye is a bit off but you can get over that easily.

SlashSeven: It's more than just a sketch or i dunno something about sketches. And hey, it looks really nice, and neat. Proportions - is the most frequent problem of all fanarts. I think that's a only thing you should work on(i mean, including shapes turned somehow in three dimensions and positioning of body parts and details relatively to other body parts and details).
BTW, great shading and so clean lines! I love such good pictures drawn only by pencil and, thank you for that one.

Sashimi: Yes, nice indeed!

vsauce4: GOD THE SHADING IS BEAUTIFUL

APayne1776: This is pretty cool

APayne1776: Wish I had art skills like this

Kori: Thanks

Kori: :))

Zargothrax: I have to agree with the others, this is some nice shading!
Also, well drawn cloak of grey tomorrow, and a plus for how nicely the drawing fades out at the bottom, instead of just "cutting off" at some point.
The only advice I'd give, is to pay attention to how the anatomy of a cat's nose really is. It's symmetric, if you draw a line down, from the tip of the nose along the surface, when it touches the mouth it touches the middle of the mouth. Because of how a cat's head/mouth/nose is shaped, there is a "notch" to the mouth, unlike with humans. You captured that well, but the centre of the "notch", and thus the mouth is off centre.

Rick2tails: i dont think she does. and I dont see how covering yourself with a miniskirt and tank top is half naked unless youre a small town prude in some movie like footloose

Kazerad: @Rick2tails: I don't know, just in sheer proportion it probably would be accurate to describe her as half naked.

Rick2tails: hmm the clothing might cover half of her surface area.I`m not sure we can really tell. But the phrase is usually used not literally but figuratively as in the someone is inappropriately dressed and by judgement a bad person if theyre a girl aka a "slut" or "whore" or someone not deserving of respect because they want sex. But that is an assumption on my part of the context intended of the term being used here

picartosux: How about we stop with this philosophical bullshit and just say that half of her body is naked. This is a good compromise.

Enheldor: @picartosux: @Rick2tails: @Kazerad:

I'm fully naked under my clothes.

XenoYparxi: oh god why
why did you do that

SlashSeven: @XenoYparxi: congrats, lol

Rick2tails: MERRY KATMAS ! one and all!

Un_Mapache: @ThatGuyWithAKhajiitWaifu: Christmas does not end until jan 6

Bill: And in Kaz time that would be... May 4?

Bill: Those lips also that left hand is a a bit small and the arm seems short but this is a pretty good crossover.

vsauce4: @Bill: but her right arm was supposed to be closer to give it a more "posey" effect

vsauce4: @Bill: and ty I worked so hard!!

Bill: It's still definitely good work nothing wrong with Jotoro Kat. I very much like her ears too (that's basically where I waste most of my art time. I spend roughly 4 to 1 days on ears to everything else.)

SlashSeven: ...Who the hell is Jojo? Idk

durandal: You are already drunk

Doprolol:

Bill: Don't know if I should call it a knock off. I mixed my style with Kaz's and this one pics.https://www.prequeladventure.com/fanartbooru/post/view/5732#c36002

Bill:

Dawoc: You misspelled "Sequel".

Bill: Lol fail

Bill: But I could always just reference the sign work in Anvil when told that. thinking outside the box.

vsauce4: @Bill: I mean, I dont consider myself a website guru but I can write pretty well. Where do I PM??

Bill: Click on my name. Should be a separate bar titled PM

PermanentFace: Not sure if misspelling is intentional.

Bill: I have a semi fixed version with proper spelling but my bad creator skills led to me not overwriting my save which was basically before I spent like 3 hours to a day just trying to make them look natural and familiar to what I based it off of in the comic. I may try to fix them again but it's past midnight and I have college tomorrow.

PermanentFace: I think it's fitting like this. As you said, Katia's most famous contribution to society is a misspelled sign.

Bill: @PermanentFace you know what. I agree to embrace my bad spelling for the sake of relevancy to anothers.

bluedraggy: The End.

bluedraggy: And the pool is updated and properly ordered here with all three stories.
https://www.prequeladventure.com/fanartbooru/pool/view/20
This concludes your excursion into Spyjirra fiction. Well, other than the audio readings! :)

bluedraggy: Just 1 more, promise! And thanks to mods for allowing me to post this. If I post another fanfiction, I'll do my best to make it more Prequel-centric.

bluedraggy: Last 3 chapters incoming. The story is complete. No more Spyjirras, I promise! Just tolerate this little spam and I'll leave the Booru in peace for a while!

damrok4321: Tried to make something, but I'm terrible at perspective

and drawing straight lines

vsauce4: @damrok4321: this is actually pretty good. perspective is one of the hardest things to master so we definitely forgive you.

SlashSeven: Perspective grid

Bill: The line work is really good apart from if you look very closely if kinda seems like the room bends in on itself but with enough practice you'll understand how to perceive a piece.

Bill: Also maybe try to master both a top down and a heads on view before trying to do an angle like this.

Rick2tails: Kaz how is referring the movie the drawing is based off being weird? oh well your board your rules

madmanransom: It seems my follow-up was also removed.
Very well.
I suppose I'll make a reasonable critique.
As always, I adore FN's color choice and shading, as well as his backgrounds, and his cutesy faces for the sake of being cute.
All-in-all this is a good piece and I can't see anything I actually dislike.
(ten cents says this comment gets deleted too, just for the sake of moderator amusement)

Sashimi: I'd like to post what's coming next but I don't know if they would pass the censorship rules. Well, one won't for sure!

Skoon: Oh no... I'M FEELING REAL WEIRD... IN THE COMMENTS!!! ;P

I love the colors on this.

Sashimi: @Skoon: This has an effect to be sure!

Toryu-Mau: ... Shoo-shoo, Bay~B! >);^D

Mikeyboi: (blind man takes off glasses)

Geravind: @Azure: It's not a grate (think like a witch-hunter) -- do you see the shadowing? It's a carpet with such pattern ...okay, it's a magic carpet with "wind up" effect.

Toryu-Mau: @Geravind: Reminds me of that one Prank Artist who would paint photo realistic holes on the floorboard of narrow hallways at my college.
Students would be walking by absentmindedly, then spot the "Hole in the floor" under their feet, almost trip over, then proceed to either be real mad or laugh uncontrollably. >)X^D

SlashSeven: >):^З