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3029: armor artist:unknown_victor character:Katia_Managan machete monochrome
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unknown_victor: @Armored-Struggle-Wagon: criticise as much as you want, the more I know what's wrong with it the more I can improve.
Armored-Struggle-Wagon: @unknown_victor: It's more of the lines I can't mentally picture anything wrong with it! Every art is beautiful in its own way, regardless of skill, and stuff. ;3 (also I don't like criticizing things
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ThatGuyWithAKhajiitWaifu: You got that machete there?
unknown_victor: @ThatGuyWithAKhajiitWaifu: it's more of a double bladed medieval round axe with an unusually long handle, but machete works too.
Cereal: I feel like the handle at some point gets a little floppy.
Like gravity takes effect and it kinda melts downwards. The waist (below the breasts and above the hips) kinda seems a bit too long, too.
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Riddle78: Abdomen seem a little long to me,and the haft on that pole axe is... Well,far,far too long for service as anything other than a spear. Also,did she have an accident with Destruction magic? Because she seems to have lost her thumbs.
That said,excellent effort. Keep kicking that cat.
unknown_victor: @Cereal: @Riddle78: yeah, I may have stretched it a little.
Don't worry, improvements will be made.
AMKitsune: @unknown_victor: Aside from the slightly iffy body proportions (which have already been mentioned above), there's not much that I can see wrong with this scene. There's not much motion behind her pose so I imagine her standing in place lifting the axe's handle to try to gauge the (substantial) weight of the thing. That axe has to be meant for some kind of monster or Daedra, right? Surely neither Man nor Mer would be able to wield that thing in battle (and that includes muscle-bound Orcish highwaymen
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On the note of 'weight' however, one thing that I'll suggest is that given how heavy the business end of that axe looks, unless katia was abnormally strong in this scene, the axe wouldn't be resting on the edge of it's blade as it currently is but would have rolled onto its flattest section (a bit like when a similar scene is shown in Grim Fandango  )
To give you a rough idea of how that might look in your scene, I made a quick edit showing the axe head at more of an angle (I'm afraid you'll have to forgive the shoddy edit job. This was never meant to be a pretty edit  )
In this case, the angle of the axe head isn't in perfect relation to the angle of the held portion of the pole (because I'm lazy), but this is just to give you an idea of how it might look with an added sense of weight. I hope this was of some help.
unknown_victor: @AMKitsune: I was going to draw it stuck in the ground, but for some reason I didn't.
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3024: adorable artist:Damn_Lasso_Tool bed bedsheet character:Katia_Managan character:nightmare_king character:your_weird_OC dreams happy hugs night nightgown romance sleep-over sleepy smiling
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Kewot_Rokar: Cute and really nice on the color palette.
ThatGuyWithAKhajiitWaifu: @Kewot_Rokar:Katia needs all the cuddles and hugs to get through the night.
aedan122: and serious, guy you have to assess that the creator can put someone to katia , you'll have to accept the reality of life.
I still want to be wrong, but when to happen, you surely will make texts and others who have a passion for a character out of the ordinary, as the that kazerad it did was horrible, bla bla bla. I hope this wrong. |
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3028: Blade artist:korblborp casually_underdressed character:Gharug_gro-Upp clover monochrome
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Unidentified_BA: I went ahead and rotated this for you. Nice pecks!
unknown_victor: Tip: when you're taking the picture try to get it in better light. Still looks cool though.
korblborp: @unknown_victor YOU tell Sony to put a better camera or a flash or something on the Vita, why dontcha. This wouldn't be an issue if my laptops weren't out of it and I could SCAN ;__;
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3016: Kvatch_arena_armor adorable artist:Makkon beautiful character:Katia_Managan portrait
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AMKitsune: Makkon, your mastery of light and form is clearly in a league of it's own amongst Prequel fans. Your eye for detail is simply extraordinary.
Do you ever live-stream/record your creative process by any chance? I ask because it would be an experience to see something like this being created in realtime. If it only takes you a few hours to create something as impressive as this piece of yours, how long must it take to make something like the image above and (what I must assume to be quicker) images like the sort found in this?
Radian: @AMKitsune: Seconding process record. But I'd prefer x2 - x3 speed.
Based on my (limited) experience I can say this piece above can be done in 1.5 - 2 hours, maybe faster. Outfit design is a bit trickier. "Pure" drawing time can be really small if you have good idea in mind but may be really long if you can't understand that's bad in your design and how to make it cool.
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Riddle78: You know,I'm seriously tempted to tug at that ear floof. No idea why. Excellent stuff,though.
Makkon: Thanks guys!
@Geravind: Yeah, I should tone that ear fluff down a bit, or at least make it match the style of the cheeks.@AMKitsune: I've had a lot of people ask, and I've had a number of false starts with streaming and recording. I have a computer that is capable of it now (painting in 16k is a breeze, though not recommended) so I could give it another shot. If I were to upload timelapsed videos I could probably make an alternate youtube channel, since my primary one is for music. I'll give it some thought. @Radian: Yeah, it was about an hour since it was just a simple bust demonstration, and I wasn't designing something new like an outfit. @Riddle78: No! Not the earfloof! You'll unravel the fabric of time! |
3027: artist:unknown_victor character:Katia_Managan monochrome sketch spear
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unknown_victor: First time drawing something without using references, accept any and all criticism.
ThatGuyWithAKhajiitWaifu: Cute :3
Geravind: It looks like weird perspective, like the camera is
lying at her feet. Here are some disproportions: a bit big legs for such hips and upper body; head and right hand are smaller than they should be; straight tail reaches exactly ground level -- easy to extrapolate the length, when it's bent; left fingers should not look so... similar; right shin/ankle/heel are a bit off. Shape of arms, tits and head looks cool. |
3023: artist:Radian character:Sigrid chiaroscuro looking_badass portrait
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Radian: @BadReligion: Sort of.
@Geravind: Ну вот зачем ты это все написал? Я ведь думал что-то неплохое получилось а ты все раскритиковал. Прямо с грязью смешал. Ух как я тебя ненавижу, лютой лютой ненавистью. Так и хочется на кол посадить. "Колобок, Колобок, я тебя чаем угощу а потом ты мне отдашь все свои ценности..." Да вроде нормальные щеки. Тени немного увеличил для драматизму. Судя по скриншотам лоб у нее высокий и линия волос едва не на макушке. Плечи пожалуй маловаты, да (ты ведь это имел в виду?). У платья именно на плечах какие-то... штуки и они довольно толстые по виду. Уот так уот.
Geravind: @Radian:
- Какого кхаджита-царя?! Как поймают -- сразу на кол, а уж опосля... - Зачем? Они любят подкалывать друг друга... - Умммн, добрый ты человек, боярин! Прости, пожалуйста. =-_-= Кхаджит хочет, чтобы у тебя получалось лучше, Кхаджит так видит -- Кхаджит не виноват. О, сколько нам открытий чудных Готовит... освещенья дух, И опыт -- сын ошибок трудных, И Гена -- Чебурашки друг. У вас ещё будет шанс в метании каках в моё творчество. Кхаджит работает медленно... но... работает. Есть, с кого брать пример *мельк на Каза*.
Armored-Struggle-Wagon: Good work, Radian! I feel she looks rather... prepared.. to kill something.
Vidiotdragon: That is one shit eatin' grin right there.
Not.. not literally its an expression we have...
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Riddle78: Oh,hey,it's Sigrid! And she looks smug!
Can I kill her? Savagely and brutally? In such a manner that would make a rabid dog look mild mannered? I think a dull bread knife would be perfect...
ThatGuyWithAKhajiitWaifu: @Riddle78: I think I'd ranther let Katia do the honors of killing sigbitch.
Makkon: Hey dude! This turned out really good! Glad that the new process helped you to level up a little :)
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2416: adorable anachronism artist:smaggthesmug character:Katia_Managan monochrome
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Kazerad: I feel like this one is a crossover with something, but I don't recognize the armor design. Maybe someone else can fill in the blanks.
Tahrey: IDK, it's maybe an eclectic mashup of various things. I think I can see elements of DBZ, The Guyver, and Fallout in there.
ThatGuyWithAKhajiitWaifu: @Tahrey: If feel a little more 'S.T.A.L.K.E.R.' vibe from it than a fallout one. It's pretty cool armor though.
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3031: Blade artist:unknown_victor character:Katia_Managan looking_badass monochrome
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The right ankle shouldn't be so freaking thin -- try to compare your own to other parts of the same leg.
The skull size, the hands and the shoulders width fit one scale, everything other (even her head's details) -- the other scale. You merged them. Small hands make her wrists to look weirdly long.
That sword is very fantastically impractical for her, but who cares...
Her hip bone is still not noticeable enough, someone will say again about "too long waist".
Your skill grows up, congratulations. =*_*=
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Mind the size of your hands. Otherwise you have good proportions. Things to focus on in the coming months and years are anatomy studies and gestures. I like to use QuickPoses to practice. Nudity, of course.
http://www.quickposes.com/
At this stage it's generally hard for me to give you specific feedback, but if you keep drawing every day and strive to find what you are weak and, and work on those weaknesses, you'll improve very fast.