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damrok4321: I shouldn't correlate a well with fishing, but every time I see one I immediately think there are fishes in there. I guess this comic really changes some aspects of how you see the world permanently.
damrok4321: @Zargothrax: I actually made that texture by hand, first drawing two straight lines, then copying them over and over until I had them covering the space which her legs take, then copying those lines again, flipping horizontally and positioning them so there became a fine fishnet like texture. Then I just placed them on a different layer and erased, so it fit inside her leg contour. I was just a bit lazy with that.
As for her pose, I sketched it this way from the beginning but I may just suck at the anatomy still and could probably design it a bit better. I appreciate your critique and will try to be more correct in the future. May I ask though how could I make her top of the shoulders visible? Should it be done by giving them more form by shading? Or rather I should just draw them differently?
damrok4321: It turned out really good, I love the atmosphere of this drawing, and the shading you did. Tbh I'm really proud of you rn. Talking you into trying to draw on paper again surely was worth it.
I am really looking forward to seeing more of the stuff you're gonna do.
damrok4321: Did somebody replace Zer and he's enjoying Rajirra drawings now? Can't believe my eyes.
Really nice work here, as always. Also because of that lighting, I thought you actually made it in digital. That's how good it looks.
damrok4321: I see this as your success zergo, this is a big step in the direction of making bigger things, my facial challenge didn't have top quality drawn expressions either, but that wasn't important. You learned stuff from this and this is what matters, the best thing which you can do right now is to keep going this way. I'm looking forward to see more stuff from you because you have the potential. I'm really moved by the fact that I inspired you.
Now speaking of what do I think about how does it look like: her facial expressions are cute and well made, the lines also aren't bad I like the way how does it look, that style has its charm. I'm kinda wondering if it wouldn't look a bit better if her fur fluffs on the cheeks had a bit thicker outline but it looks fine anyway. Of what could you do to make it look a bit better? I think maybe add variety to the way of how her hand moves? Like, when we do move, we don't actually make it exactly the same way every time, her hand kinda looks like it would be robotic, making slight changes in its position every time it goes back and forth maybe could help a little bit. Anyway, again, keep up the good work.
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As for her pose, I sketched it this way from the beginning but I may just suck at the anatomy still and could probably design it a bit better. I appreciate your critique and will try to be more correct in the future. May I ask though how could I make her top of the shoulders visible? Should it be done by giving them more form by shading? Or rather I should just draw them differently?
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I am really looking forward to seeing more of the stuff you're gonna do.
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Really nice work here, as always. Also because of that lighting, I thought you actually made it in digital. That's how good it looks.
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Now speaking of what do I think about how does it look like: her facial expressions are cute and well made, the lines also aren't bad I like the way how does it look, that style has its charm. I'm kinda wondering if it wouldn't look a bit better if her fur fluffs on the cheeks had a bit thicker outline but it looks fine anyway. Of what could you do to make it look a bit better? I think maybe add variety to the way of how her hand moves? Like, when we do move, we don't actually make it exactly the same way every time, her hand kinda looks like it would be robotic, making slight changes in its position every time it goes back and forth maybe could help a little bit. Anyway, again, keep up the good work.
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@Zerorganic why...
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