TimDodd: Your art is hideous and you should stop drawing forever.

NotGodOkay: And you can draw better?

Hapumf: No
He just need to start over.
You need something that not so easy to draw first, and something that he will be proud.
Change your style bro, You can do this!
Try to put your heart into the drawing, and never forget to not just draw, but every time learn from your mistakes
And my last wish for You
Never give up
You can be better version of yourself)

Tony_Faullki: just dont make the tits so big and it'll be more acceptable, also arms are a good thing to add