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6315: Cloak_of_Gray_Tomorrow Katia's_Thief_Tunic Katia's_adventurer_outfit Katia's_wizard_robe Kvatch_arena_armor artist:lapma blood_from_the_eyes character:Katia_Managan text wallpaper
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6318: TES_Oblivion anvil knock_off screenshot
6317: adorable artist:KuroNeko blood braids character:Little_Katia character:your_weird_OC guar_plush knock_off monochrome tears
6316: artist:unknown character:Katia_Managan ghost_shirt magic_fire painted_underwear
- Reply Also is that traditional or digital art? I think it mightbe digital but I'm not sure. - Reply - Reply |
4251: adorable artist:Sret character:Katia_Managan monochrome not_sure_if_racist portrait tears
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picartosux: This is animal abuse, I'm calling PETA.
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6307: Cosplay TES_Oblivion anvil character:Katia_Managan inconsistent_rendering knock_off mod screenshot
- Reply - Reply - Reply But maybe I can do that anyway cause I can call this character an OC and get away with it right? There's plenty of these guys that I have in mind so specifically this one that I just made can be released as an OC because there's a-lot of them. Or maybe I should show this character and see if it's tolerable. In "Them" and "This" are something I call Stitchies. |
6311: character:Katia_Managan dwemer_automaton dwemer_technology fire painted_underwear
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Lurci: Sotha Sil wasn't sure if he originally wanted to built a fightbot with flamethrower or a sexbot.
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6314: actual_underwear artist:unknown blood blood_from_the_eyes character:Katia_Managan
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6321: animation artist:KuroNeko books character:Quill-Weave monochrome reading
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Still I'm not entierelly satisfied with this, especially her head.
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The angle of her head seems very high for reading the book in its current position. It feels like it would be more natural and relaxed for her head to be tilted further down.
Given that she looks like she's holding the book with both hands, the flipping page seems a weird in its stiffness and motion. It would make sense if it were 'flicked' from one side to the other (although that would involve a degree of page bending while on its way) or if she was turning the page by hand, but as it is, it looks like the page is turning by itself. A possible alternative for a scene like this could be for her to close and reopen the book. It's hard to say without actually seeing it in motion, but that feels like it should convey the 'turning the page' message.
Finally, I always imagine lizard tails as being attached to their host body at their widest point, but the tail here seems to taper off to a narrow point before connecting to the body. Perhaps that's a stylistic choice on your part, in which case, don't mind this, but it just strikes me as seeming a bit 'wrong'.
That aside though, a very nice image. The imperfections and 'wiggle' that come from individually drawn frames like this are just so endearing and she looks so engrossed in what she's reading. Actually, that raises one last tiny suggestion. In instances where the inside of a book is visible, perhaps covering the pages with some 'fake text' squiggly lines could help make it more readily apparent that they're actual pages? It's easy enough to tell once you look at the animation as it is, but the blank pages probably aren't helping much in that regard.
Keep up the good work!
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@AMKitsune: As always thank you very much for your helpful advices
@PermanentFace: Oh, it's her usual outfit, I just felt like adding some decorations to it.
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